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Tristan Elevated Bloon
Staff Message : i'm tristan Posts : 15097 Age : 28 Fuji Bucks™ : 18746 Reputation : 42
| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Fri Nov 20, 2009 9:04 pm | |
| Jesus Christ Shady! I don't know if I can top that.. and don't give up Soup. |
| | | SOUP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Fri Nov 20, 2009 9:35 pm | |
| I will! Mine would be like 1/10 of that and hers would be 398213498718 times better! |
| | | Invisifly2 Marine Glory
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Fri Nov 20, 2009 10:13 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
- MissClyde wrote:
- Aight, look,
I was sitting there in the car, focused on the radio I heard a show host say the words 'Platinum Trio' I thought he'd be talking 'bout 50, Em, and Dre But he was talking 'bout Drake, Wayne, and that Kanye I was intrigued, this is what hip hop has become Rappers spitting with autotune, talking how they get some And how they went worldwide with a crappy album And how they went to the club and got themselves a madam And how they got so much money they could afford a sanctum Plus how they beat up other people just to get some action And caught a ride to a party, and shot a bouncer with a handgun Took a girl for a swing to their brand new mansion Get so much dough, they don't want expansion But hip hop used to be about shit you could relate to Rappers understanding shit that really frustrates you Sprinkle in some comedy - rhymes that could elate you And if you had a shitty day, there'd be rhymes that could placate you Rhymes so legit, they'd be like water to hydrate you Or something so inspirational, it actually created you Rappers spitting like Tupac, rhymes no one could equate to No one could equate to – these rhymes! They could sensate you Even raps about news that could actually update you Real issues! Real people! Rapping bout real shit But now it's just about how someone banged a brand new chick Or it’s about how someone’s got dough and bought a brand new bling Or how they got a girl and bought her a diamond ring Went down to the club just to spend their ching-ching Calling themselves emcees when all they do is just sing These rhymes aren’t from the mind, they use no imagination While rhymes two years ago actually enchanted the nation Causing controversy, real rap was played on every station Rap had so much emotion it would cause a human sensation Imagine that shit, and what hip hop is now No raps on the radio that make you go ‘wow’ Just the same old shit about bros, hoes, and money Nothing interesting, no rhymes that are funny Nothing on the radio about real issues Just a rapper singing – ‘oh, baby, I miss you’ No one plays shit about things people care about Nothing about politics – rap these days is worn out These days, there’s no rap that helps you through a shitty day Just shit bout how to rebel, ‘n’ cause trouble out your way No amazing storytellers – where’d the old Nas go? And remember the old Harlem? Now he’s rapping about hoes Only man that’s stayed raw is my man Dr Dre Still rapping sick, using unheard words to convey 50’s getting raw, but he has no shit like ‘Many Men’ He just raps punchline on punchline and that’s how the beat is spent And even Em has changed; he has no shit like ‘Infinite’ I hate today’s rap, Ima need your help to put an end to it That...was ...epicagreed 100%, we should put this on youtube.... |
| | | Tristan Elevated Bloon
Staff Message : i'm tristan Posts : 15097 Age : 28 Fuji Bucks™ : 18746 Reputation : 42
| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Fri Nov 20, 2009 10:26 pm | |
| Rytoz may be plotzed at Clydes shitty lyrics spitted at me She be a punk ass bitch, just another wannabe MC Mothafucka's fucked, fucked up the ass and fucked generally Generally exposed for who you truly are, baby You're a 40 year old man, disquised as a lady Shady, just listen to this shit, can't you see I'm undefeatable? Ya sound like a mentally messed up mother fucker. And that's untreatable Beatable I'm not, not here to play around I'm renowned, surrounded by suround sound Sterio systems, 'cuz yall know Ima rich bitch I got an itch to spit, it's in ma blood, like a glitch Oh yeah.. Did I tell ya? My testacles are like vegetables The ladies eat em up, they can even be bisexual I don't give a shit, it doesn't make a difference They suck me, fuck me, then I say good riddance That's how I roll, controlled with no soul, I'm an asshole Ima beat Shady first, but that's not my last goal My last goal is to have a roal in society Matter of fact, no, I'll stay in the state of sobriety A variety of lyrics I have, from old style to the fresh Commmonly used phrase applied: don't mess with the best That's me, Sk8er the dictator and creator of haters The greator of haters, waited on hand and foot With brand new, fresh lyrics spitted after freshly designed Shady'n Shush combined, remind, me of the end of mankind They're both daringly deplorable, couldn't be more horrible On a rating of cuteness. They're zero. I'm adorable Wakin' up at six thirty A.M. an everyday thing for me Rappin shit better than eminem, workin harder too, ya see Born to be adorn, that's my purpose on earth, this planet Scorned and sworned due to jealousy. Fuck them haters, damn it I bring pain to Lil Wayne, my critically insane domain name is entertain. Dot com Oh. Shady. By the way. I knocked up your mom. At my last prom She was young at the time, as was I. By the way, I'm fourty! She sucked my dick easily, because she was a shorty.. Later that night, from darkness to light, I hit that hoe Shit. I almost forgot, Shady. I'm your father, did ya know? Listen up Clyde. My shit spreads all the way worldwide Your cried eyes show the exact reason your album was denied To get sent anywhere, it was zero percent aight, compared to my fair share Of decently spat out lyrics consistently disappearin because they been taken By Biggie, Eminem, Dr. Dre, and a jamaican That I call Wayne the insane motha fucka, nigga needs to step back Bitch slapped metaphorically, Shady, you've just been verbally attacked |
| | | Bonnie White Knight
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Fri Nov 20, 2009 11:27 pm | |
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| | | Jshushij Elevated Bloon
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sat Nov 21, 2009 1:40 am | |
| This contest is epic. Imma still gonna try, but compared to those, dont get your hopes up too high. |
| | | chimchim930 Friendly Fiend
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sat Nov 21, 2009 1:43 am | |
| whoa maybe my cute little joke rap wont do it... |
| | | Tristan Elevated Bloon
Staff Message : i'm tristan Posts : 15097 Age : 28 Fuji Bucks™ : 18746 Reputation : 42
| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:45 am | |
| Get those entries in. I'm impatient. Shades u keep saying you're gonna reply to ma rap, but there's only one entry! |
| | | Bonnie White Knight
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:03 pm | |
| Verbally attacked? I've got shit on you You dissing me for no reason, Ima have to spit back at you Spit black at you, smack you, spank you, leave you crying and thank you 'I fucked your mother' goddamn that cliche Is that the best you got? You're a fucking castaway That line is so overused, it just shows your level of imagination Ima cut your genitals off like Zeus did - CASTRATION
Your rhymes are so peasantly, it just shows your creativeness After I'm finished with you, everybody here be showing plaintiveness Your rhymes are so fake, you might just be the next Drake I make my own rhymes, while you get yours made Your rhymes are so insignificant, away they will fade Into nothingness, while mine will be remembered forever Your rhymes split people apart, while mine bring them together You rap in vain - you might just be the next Wayne You copy whatevers in, while Ima keep it the same! I wasn't even rapping atchoo, so why'd you diss me? Do you have a fucking death wish? Goddamn, I've missed me You're dropping N Bombs and you're a fucking whiteboy The only thing that you jump are your fucking fight toys! I'm so fucking insanely physcotic Quick, someone gimme an antibiotic! Don't you dare look over the fact that is my victory The crown placed on my head is just exactly how it's meant to be Some call it fate, and the rest call it destiny While I settle for the crowd, Sk9 doesn't settle for less than cheese My rap is so old school I'm writing this with a quill It's real until you feel you've lost that dream you'd just fulfilled Look, you've just been killed, drilled, your head shoved into an anthill You stole rhymes on MyNK, who's to say you won't still? Rapping 'Never Forget Me' like it'd come from above your own grill You were lying, cheating, stealing, squealing, like a fucking drama queen When I caught you out, you ignored me, like I was unclean And between all that you were acting all lean Like you could fuck with Shady Shakur -- I'm a fucking MACHINE! You had a vaccine like Maxine and still acted like your act was clean When you test positive, I was laughing hard, but hidden, unseen Little boy, don't mess with the better characters of your story book Cause if you do, you'll be lesser, and sent to the jury, look! Oh what's that you say? That you're sorry? Nah, you're a sook I know I stole the glory of the story - and the jury - from the rookie Since you're just a little boy you can just call me...crookie |
| | | Tristan Elevated Bloon
Staff Message : i'm tristan Posts : 15097 Age : 28 Fuji Bucks™ : 18746 Reputation : 42
| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:07 pm | |
| - Sk9 wrote:
- Just post one rap. One good rap.
You're only supposed to put one shade D: |
| | | Bonnie White Knight
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:08 pm | |
| I WANNA REPLY TO YOUR RAP
ITS NOT MY ENTRY |
| | | Tristan Elevated Bloon
Staff Message : i'm tristan Posts : 15097 Age : 28 Fuji Bucks™ : 18746 Reputation : 42
| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:10 pm | |
| I know but people might vote for you because of that. |
| | | Bonnie White Knight
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:12 pm | |
| People, don't vote for me because of that, judge me on the one I posted first.
I wanted to reply to your diss :) |
| | | Tristan Elevated Bloon
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:33 pm | |
| But you didn't follow the rules. You're disqualifiedjk |
| | | SOUP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:45 pm | |
| Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! |
| | | Bonnie White Knight
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:04 pm | |
| WTF? IS THAT HOW DESPERATELY YOU WANNA WIN? |
| | | SOUP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:07 pm | |
| Thats not cool Sk9.
Not
Cool... |
| | | Tristan Elevated Bloon
Staff Message : i'm tristan Posts : 15097 Age : 28 Fuji Bucks™ : 18746 Reputation : 42
| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:12 pm | |
| Wtf! Ready the minitext, damnit! |
| | | Bonnie White Knight
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:13 pm | |
| DO YOU WANT ME TO EDIT THE POST SO THAT NO ONE CAN SEE THE RAP THAT WAS BETTER THAN YOURS? |
| | | Tristan Elevated Bloon
Staff Message : i'm tristan Posts : 15097 Age : 28 Fuji Bucks™ : 18746 Reputation : 42
| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:26 pm | |
| SHADY. LOOK AT THE SMALL TEXT ON THE LAST PAGE ON THE POST I SAID YOU CANT ENTER. JESUS FUCKING CHRIST. |
| | | Bonnie White Knight
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:28 am | |
| Ahhh, right.
Sorry!
I thought it was a full stop. |
| | | Tristan Elevated Bloon
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:42 am | |
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| | | Invisifly2 Marine Glory
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:59 pm | |
| - Sk9 wrote:
- That's me, Sk8er the dictator and creator of haters
and later Fuck them haters, damn it im confuzzeld.....lyrics contradiction fail....
stuff in bold added by me, underlinin 2 - Spoiler:
THAT WAS EPIC
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| | | Tristan Elevated Bloon
Staff Message : i'm tristan Posts : 15097 Age : 28 Fuji Bucks™ : 18746 Reputation : 42
| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Mon Nov 23, 2009 9:13 pm | |
| Fuck the haters that fuck with me because they're jealous. I'm a hater/prick in general. That's what it means. well, i dont mean it, but its a rap |
| | | Jshushij Elevated Bloon
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| Subject: Re: Rap Contest XI Mon Nov 23, 2009 10:33 pm | |
| That font on the last page was WAY too small. You expected us to see that?
But lawl, it was a good joke. |
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