I want some constructive criticism for this. I'm battling a GFXer that's pretty good.

Too simple; add more stuff to the background.

Okay..

The text is too big and distracting. size it down a bit, especially your name.
The cartoonish render doesn't seem to fit well with the background.
The wind is an okay effect, but doesn't seem needed to me, but the render does need to fit the background.

That's all I'll say for criticism.

The render isn't blended in well with the background, also the choice of background colour isn't good. There aren't really C4D's anywhere, add them to make it more exciting.

that's all.

5/10

Please do not use bold.

Julian, try not to mini-mod. Moderators can handle their jobs. Bold is allowed.

Wasn't it Dreamly's mod color?

I was just advising:P