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Welcome to Fuji Planet, a forum that offers a unique experience.

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PostSubject: Short story   Short story EmptyMon Jun 14, 2010 11:00 pm

I wrote it, tell me if you like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Short story   Short story EmptyWed Jun 16, 2010 11:11 pm

Very interesting story. It's cleverly written as well. I like it. You definitely have some talent with writing. There are a couple parts that could have been better, but everyone does something that can be better. But I believe I know what the story is about and what it is portraying. Nicely done Wink.
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Thanks a lot, dude.
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