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 |  Subject: Re: The Harsher Side of Reality - Another story by Aloe Sat Dec 18, 2010 12:00 pm | |
| And therefore the image of perfect love.. |
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| | Subject: Re: The Harsher Side of Reality - Another story by Aloe Sun Dec 19, 2010 12:29 am | |
| No, she represents only what he wants. He sees 'perfect love' s a beautiful girl; this may not be the same for everyone. He saw what he wanted deep down. I'm going to reveal something personal; the main character of this story represents me. Minus the orphan part and the male part, of course. And I'm not 17.  I have a friend whose image of 'perfect love' was, as he reported, a simple hug. |
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| | Subject: Re: The Harsher Side of Reality - Another story by Aloe Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:43 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: The Harsher Side of Reality - Another story by Aloe Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:44 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: The Harsher Side of Reality - Another story by Aloe Sun Dec 19, 2010 5:57 am | |
| - Aloe wrote:
- No, she represents only what he wants. He sees 'perfect love' s a beautiful girl; this may not be the same for everyone. He saw what he wanted deep down.
I'm going to reveal something personal; the main character of this story represents me. Minus the orphan part and the male part, of course. And I'm not 17.
I have a friend whose image of 'perfect love' was, as he reported, a simple hug. Nice. Foils are always good in stories, they allow you to add insight/character to the story |
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