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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 6:53 pm

Can I post mine in 8 hours? I'm gonna be at school a bit longer than normal today :S
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 8:07 pm

Omg, you guys are taking forever. Fine...
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 8:08 pm

i wanna read the last two
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 8:09 pm

They're taking forever Poop.
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 8:09 pm

yeah i know
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 10:33 pm

Sorry for the delay. Here is my winning rap Wink

Yo, its all Jshushij up in all these contests,
Racking up all the golds like im on a conquest,
Shady, surrender now you know that im the best,
I wont let you rest til you see that im blessed,
Naturally i be the worlds greatest in rappin,
Shady you better watch out, anything can happen,
Man this is going to be tragic and so real that its graphic,
It is going to go down in the national geographic,
As one of the worst disasters to ever seen,
Dont waste your time Shady, look away from the screen,
My flow is like water my lyrics are like fire,
They will burn you slow and take me higher,
Flow coming down fluid like liquid when it hit,
These rhymes be flowing totally legit,
Shady, theres no walking away from this shit,
I be giving you as much hell as I can commit,
My raps rhythm your raps are a crime.
You more fake then the books from R.L Stine,
Its time for you Shady to conceal the last meal,
Your execution begins right after i get a record deal,
You can try to keep up if you feel,
But my raps rock solid as steel,
So why not give up and suffer your defeat,
It will be better off if you just retreat,
I’ll take you 1-on-1 in the middle of the street,
But in the end you know youll always be beat,
Im winning first prize, thats good as concrete,
Just reading my flow ive written here is a treat,
I slam rappers like this was hockey,
Punch em in the jaw like I was Rocky,
Bring a whole defense and you still couldn't stop me,
So unstoppable, they call me Jeremy Shockey,
I'm guessing your known to be the showstopper,
While i'm known as J, the greatest rhyme dropper,
Gimme my points, because Im hungry and greedy,
Stealing change out the cups of the hungry and needy,
Time to pump up the party now, lay down some rhymes,
Ive been laying some down now, its about time,
Bum rush the speaker that booms,
I'm killing your brain like a poisonous mushroom,
Deadly, when I play a dope melody,
Anything less than the best is a felony,
Been flowing like this since the days I was raised,
I was winning competitions way back in the days,
Ever since then Ive been known to amaze,
But I still got it in me, Im still a blaze,
Everyone wants to hear me put some rhymes down,
Everyone knows me, Im world renown,
Im too hot for the oven, too cool for fridge,
Everything hatin, even valleys and a mountain ridge,
My tone, my beats be electrifying,
My famous sound be death-defying,
If i were you Shady thered be no replying,
Reading your stuff is like watchin paint drying,
There aint no point slowin what cant be stopped,
In the end Shady, you know youll be dropped,
My rhymes are smooth as as a babys skin,
Im the best flowin rapper there ever been,
Dont bother going against me Ive just begin,
Now its time for sk8er to say i win,
My beat has been heard, already occured,
Shady is absurd. Im the winner. Word!


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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 10:43 pm

:shock: THAT WAS TIGHT! Damn, you a good rapper man. But sadly YOU'RE DISQUALIFIED! "Got spring hatin on me cuz i aint never sprung,
Got winter hatin on me cuz i'm cooler than y'all,
And i would never in history, i would never fall,
I been hatin by all the four the seasons,
And i hate y'all who hatin for no reasons,"
That was ALL from Lil Waynes rap Mr. Carter. If you're going to try to cheat, next time make sure Sk8er isn't the judge. tongue
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 10:48 pm

Dude, that was an accidental copy. What I did is look at real raps for inspiration, and I must have remembered it off of the top of my head on accident. I didnt realize what I did! I edited it out, and I hope its acceptable. ANyways, Shady did the same thing too...

Anyways, sorry sk8er. Is the way it is (I deleted it) acceptable?
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 10:54 pm

"I kill freestyles like OJ did his wife." I've heard that one too. And Shady didn't copy lyrics, she just used the beat of a song.
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 10:55 pm

Where do you see that? Thats from something else...
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 11:06 pm

Ok, take out that one rhyme and I'll except it.
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 11:27 pm

Yay! Cant wait to see Shady's!

Thanks Sk8er for making this contest, and for being a fair judge. It was loads of fun and I enjoyed the entire thing. Good luck Shady!
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyTue Aug 18, 2009 12:25 am

i read the first quarter of your rap then got bored
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyTue Aug 18, 2009 4:55 am

I'm really sorry for rapping so late, but here we go... ahem.



You say you’re ill and can fight on the street

Fuck that shit, you might be ill but I’m elite

You’d flee if you could see what I can do, it’s what I’ll bet

You tried to mess with me, and now you’re gonna regret

Even saying my name, and you haven’t got the crown yet

If you think that you’ll get the crown you’re about to get upset

Because you can’t rap for shit, not even over the net

These disses that I’m throwing make you break out in a sweat

You get that, yeah, because all you say are empty threats

If raps were memories, everything you’d forget

You suck motherfucker! Your rhymes are so cheesy!

I rap like Young Jeezy – yeaaaaah! Haha, my rhymes are so breezy

The way I rap, I make it look fucking easy

The way I snap, I make you feel so queasy

You’re a sleazy motherfucker, and you’re flow isn’t clean

But when I step on the scene, my raps become the best ever seen

If I were a teen, then shit, you’d be a tween

I’m keen to beat you, jshushij, your face has turned green

If I were a movie your eyes could never leave the screen

My rhymes are so mean, I should be rap Queen

My rhymes are so hot the fans put on sunscreen

Every time they see me coming, and now it’s routine

You say you’re too hot for the oven, too cool for the fridge

Hey - you just don’t fit in here, so stop rapping, bitch!

Your rhymes are horrid, sloppy like porridge

I hate your rhymes, they belong in the garbage

Jshushij, you don’t know what to say

Cause by reading this rhyme, you’ve just been slayed

Its Shady motherfuckers! And I’m here to stay

If I danced hip-hop, then you’d do ballet

I’ve left you for dead, and to decay

That Shady lady was bound to win someday

It’s just your luck, jshushij – that day is today

Tuesday August 18th, 2009

Instead of rapping, I think you should have resigned

Or just shut up, because that crown was always mine

So move over bitches…it’s my time to shine.
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyTue Aug 18, 2009 7:33 am

I really don't know who wins! They're both like the same level of goodness. I'll put it to a poll in another section.
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Shady4Eva wrote:
I'm really sorry for rapping so late, but here we go... ahem.



You say you’re ill and can fight on the street

Fuck that shit, you might be ill but I’m elite

You’d flee if you could see what I can do, it’s what I’ll bet

You tried to mess with me, and now you’re gonna regret

Even saying my name, and you haven’t got the crown yet

If you think that you’ll get the crown you’re about to get upset

Because you can’t rap for shit, not even over the net

These disses that I’m throwing make you break out in a sweat

You get that, yeah, because all you say are empty threats

If raps were memories, everything you’d forget

You suck motherfucker! Your rhymes are so cheesy!

I rap like Young Jeezy – yeaaaaah! Haha, my rhymes are so breezy

The way I rap, I make it look fucking easy

The way I snap, I make you feel so queasy

You’re a sleazy motherfucker, and you’re flow isn’t clean

But when I step on the scene, my raps become the best ever seen

If I were a teen, then shit, you’d be a tween

I’m keen to beat you, jshushij, your face has turned green

If I were a movie your eyes could never leave the screen

My rhymes are so mean, I should be rap Queen

My rhymes are so hot the fans put on sunscreen

Every time they see me coming, and now it’s routine

You say you’re too hot for the oven, too cool for the fridge

Hey - you just don’t fit in here, so stop rapping, bitch!

Your rhymes are horrid, sloppy like porridge

I hate your rhymes, they belong in the garbage

Jshushij, you don’t know what to say

Cause by reading this rhyme, you’ve just been slayed

Its Shady motherfuckers! And I’m here to stay

If I danced hip-hop, then you’d do ballet

I’ve left you for dead, and to decay

That Shady lady was bound to win someday

It’s just your luck, jshushij – that day is today

Tuesday August 18th, 2009

Instead of rapping, I think you should have resigned

Or just shut up, because that crown was always mine

So move over bitches…it’s my time to shine.

I still don't believe it even though you used a font, size and italics code...
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyTue Aug 18, 2009 9:09 am

You don't think it's original? Google the fucking thing, it's mine!
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyTue Aug 18, 2009 12:41 pm

I believe you Shady. Go to off topic to vote who wins!
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyTue Aug 18, 2009 11:40 pm

Alright! This is exciting! Good luck Shady!
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyWed Aug 19, 2009 2:09 am

You too, you're an amazing rapper xD

Edit: http://www.mtv.com/news/articles/1618897/20090817/raekwon.jhtml
Help Shady win! (Don't mean to spam, I mean, it is a rap article).
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 3:11 pm

Definately not Eminem. I voted for Kid Cudi, Drake and Jay Z.

Since Kanye West doesn't really have a new CD out, I didn't vote for him. His last CD wasn't amzing, either.
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptyThu Aug 27, 2009 7:21 pm

I don't listen to Kid Cudi but I voted Drake and Jay Z aswell.
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PostSubject: Re: Rap Contest Vlll   Rap Contest Vlll - Page 3 EmptySun Aug 30, 2009 6:03 pm

Ok, this is over, please put this in the gallery.
Jshushij is the Rap Champ of Fuji.
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yay for Jshushij
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