If anyone has any experience (and I mean any) in editing stories, I would appreciate it if you gave me a PM or posted on this topic and I could send you some drafts of the story i'm writing. If you want more information on the story, PM me. Or just ask in this thread, it doesn't really matter.

what's it about

Bout a detective (do you know a better word for that haha) who kills his girlfriend for having an affair. He then eventually becomes addicted to killing and becomes a serial murderer. He's put on the case to find the serial murderer (himself) with his partner, who is one of the best detectives in the country. I don't know if it sounds interesting like that but I assure you there will be A LOT in inner conflict. The story is also in 3rd person so and will be side-stories on other characters.

What do you want it edited for? I'm the Copy Editor for my school newspaper; I could edit it for grammar if that's what you're looking for. Depends how long it is though

Tristan wrote:

What do you want it edited for? I'm the Copy Editor for my school newspaper; I could edit it for grammar if that's what you're looking for. Depends how long it is though

That would be great. I'm looking for anything that you think could make my story better. YEM already said he would do it but the more people who check it before I upload the better.

I'm uploading it by chapter, so I would need it uploaded by chapter as well. The chapters would vary in length however i'm expecting the first one to be around 2000-2500 words.

Oh my lanta. I'll try

You don't have to if you dont want to, but id appreciate it. Oh, and I forgot to mention, the first chapter probably wont be done for a few more days... unless I get a suddenly get a monumental amount of inspiration.

You got me

I dunno if I would be that much help but I wanna read it.

SOUP wrote:

Bout a detective (do you know a better word for that haha) who kills his girlfriend for having an affair. He then eventually becomes addicted to killing and becomes a serial murderer. He's put on the case to find the serial murderer (himself) with his partner, who is one of the best detectives in the country. I don't know if it sounds interesting like that but I assure you there will be A LOT in inner conflict. The story is also in 3rd person so and will be side-stories on other characters.

I really want to read it, please. I love detective stories. I'm a big fan of Sherlock Holmes.

If everyone wants to read it i'll start doing more work. I didn't do a lot over March break, but now that schools back up i'll start doing more.

You better